I think you are repeating yourself a bit too much there.
The concept of an objective morality vs relative, can be simply and clearly defined, so reduce your verbosity and simplify. The most elegant statments make the greatest impact.
What is the purpose of your paper btw? I mean a paper just on Morality would encompass quite a bit. Is it on objective vs Relative? Is it on the problems WITH objective morality? The problems with the idea of morality in the first place? |